PLACE TO VISIT

AN EXAMPLE

I have many places I wish to visit in the future. For example, I wish to visit Australia, Finland and France. Those are attractive countries for me.

First, I want to go Australia because I would like to see its magnificant nature. When I saw the pictures, I was surprised how huge country it was. Those were taken in my friends house. It was like a park. I'm also interested in its culture. Australian culture is the mixture of the natipve's and England's. It's different from Japanese one. So, I want to know how they have been made.

Second, I want to go Finland because there are famouse for Santa Clause and aurora. When I was a childhood, I believed that Santa Clause existed. Also, seeing aurora is one of my big dream in my life. I know it's difficult to see that, but I would like to see. Because it's very mystic phenomenon. 

Third, I want to go France because I like its landscape. I often watch French movie. Whenever I watch them, I think I that I want to go there. I also learned French, so I want to learn more. Because it has different characteristic from Japanese grammar, like it has feminine nouns and masculine nouns. I'm interested in them.

In conclusion, I like traveling very much. Because I can meet different cultural people, eat delicious foods and see many beautiful landscapes. I want to know many differences between Japan and foreign countries through travelings.

*Fuente: http://lang-8.com/295042/journals/1609611